Just a busy day and a busy week to come
Tuesday 9:11 PM
Please provide a short essay
(500 words or less) that discusses your service experience and commitment to campus activities/campus
leadership or serving your local community. High school or collegiate
service experience can include work within your department or college, service
organizations, fraternities and sororities, honorary organizations, etc.
I had never been highly involved
in school activities until I entered high school. The summer before my freshman
year I vowed that I would become more open and participate in school events as
a way to break out of my shell. Fortunately, my school required twenty community
service hours preventing me from taking back my promise. I wondered how I would
achieve these hours. I could volunteer at a food shelter or maybe a dog shelter
I wasn’t completely sure, all I knew is that I had to make an impact. Luckily my
answer was in my school’s daily announcements. As the speaker in the intercom said
the words “Service Saturday’s” all my problems drifted away and my weekend was
full.
That's all I got, see you soon. Night!
9:19 PM
Yay! Another Ale's Days blog post! I was so excited when I got another email! What are you gonna w College Depot? For your essay I like the part where you mentioned your vow and keeping your promise. I think that communicates determination to the reader. I think it's a strong start! 😃
ReplyDeleteThanks for the feedback. Did you have a typo "What are you gonna w College Depot?"
Delete